Can someone please show an example of how they wrote their experience description?

[Mr. H]

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Hi, i just want to make sure I'm on the right track, so if someone could put in an example it would be great!

 

[oldman]

Here's one I put down, "I tutored a student who was taking the second semester of Calculus. The students who have failed their first exam are eligible. Every week, I would meet with my tutee and we would go over the weekly assignment and material. In the end the student passed the course."

 

[Doctora Foxy]

As an active member of the Delta Phi Epsilon Sorority, I attended weekly organizational meetings and events. I was an active participant in fundraising for the sorority's two philanthropies, the Cystic Fibrosis Foundation and the National Association of Anorexia Nervosa and Associated Disorders. Furthermore, the other sisters and I coordinated a speaker at Brandeis University to tell of her experience in dealing with anorexia nervosa. Being a sorority member has taught me leadership and sisterhood.

 

[seaturtle112]

I like dra. foxy's and oldman's too. it tells what they did, what they learned/got out of it, and it makes them seem human. make it interesting to read, not all deadpan factual. put some of yourself into it, so they see who YOU are.

here one of mine:
"In the summer of 1997 between classes and coaching I worked as a Dialysis Assistant at MVH in Dayton. I set up dialysis machines, stocked supply rooms, and had general cleaning duties. The job was my first experience in a healthcare setting. The morbidity of advanced kidney disease and diabetes had a real impact on me."

if they wanna know the specific "impact", they should invite me for an interview! :wink: ha!

 

[oldman]

thanks seaturtle!

i take it you are applying for the upcoming cycle?

•••quote:•••Originally posted by seaturtle112:
•I like dra. foxy's and oldman's too. it tells what they did, what they learned/got out of it, and it makes them seem human. make it interesting to read, not all deadpan factual. put some of yourself into it, so they see who YOU are.

here one of mine:
"In the summer of 1997 between classes and coaching I worked as a Dialysis Assistant at MVH in Dayton. I set up dialysis machines, stocked supply rooms, and had general cleaning duties. The job was my first experience in a healthcare setting. The morbidity of advanced kidney disease and diabetes had a real impact on me."

if they wanna know the specific "impact", they should invite me for an interview! :wink: ha!•••••