I drafted mine too but it might be super terrible so I'm not sure hahaha. Should we focus on how different we are, or how our differences will add to the class? It felt like I was saying, "I'm super unique! But don't worry I'm gonna be okay in medicine, it actually works out really well this way!" And then I feel like I'm shoving my diversity under the rug. I don't know. Maybe it's not like that. I just am not sure what to emphasize, I guess.
Personally, I just talked about an experience I had growing up, how it shaped me, what I learned, and how I will enhance the med school community and/or be a better physician.
Here some advice I got browsing random threads on the topic:
One thing you need to keep in mind (for most schools) is that there is no real such thing as unique in the way most people think of it. No matter what you think about there will be someone out there who can talk to what you have experienced. The uniqueness aspect really comes from how you processed that experience. I am sure there is someone on this thread who can relate to such an experience or even had the exact same experience, but the way they responded or grew from that experience is probably different from the way I did, which is why I focused on discussing how I grew and what I have attained from such an experience. Its your perspective that is unique not your actual experience.
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Go into your upbringing, how it shaped you, how you will bring that to the medical profession and how it will help you relate to your classmates and patients from different backgrounds
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-Do I get the sense that this person would feel comfortable around others in both medical and non-medical contexts?
-Do I get the sense that this person has a perspective of the world and others that is beyond their own experience?
-Could I see this person interacting with a random person that comes to my school's hospital for treatment?
-Does this person bring something interesting to the class, be that interesting experiences, a different background, etc.?
More important than whatever experience(s) you talk about is how you explain them in the context of being a physician. Rather than just listing facts about yourself, be sure to explain WHY those experiences are important to who you have become as a person and HOW that background will help you operate as a better physician. If you do that, then I would consider your essay successful.