Completed My Personal Statement - Need Advice on How to Improve It!!!!

[oldpremed38]

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Hello everyone. I have a rough draft of my personal statement and I would greatly appreciate it if anyone would be so kind to look at it and offer me any advice on how I may improve it. I will send my personal statement to anyone (through private message) who would be willing to take a look at it. I intend on applying to a majority of DO schools (and at least a few MD schools).

Thank you in advance to anyone who is willing to read my personal statement and offer any kind of advice on how I may improve it!!!!

 

[zNoodlez]

I would be happy to help 🙂

 

[oldpremed38]

I would be happy to help 🙂

Thank you very much!!!! I will send you a private message tomorrow morning with the personal statement. Any input you could give me will be greatly appreciated.

 

[GoSpursGo]

Please don't post the same thread in multiple places. Anyone wishing to help the OP may do so here: Completed a Rough Draft of my Personal Statement - Need Help on How to Improve It!!!!