Could someone read my 3 half-done personal statements

This forum made possible through the generous support of SDN members, donors, and sponsors. Thank you.
Get help with your application

Use all the free resources available to you from SDN: articles, guides, expert advising, forums discussions, and school research.

kgamon8

Full Member
5+ Year Member
Advertisement - Members don't see this ad
I am nowhere near being done. and I'm pretty much stuck. I have an intro I like and need help going from there. If anyone who has a little experience would help, I would really appreciate it!