Critique my PS?

[kejs]

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I've been trying to polish it and work out some kinks. Could anyone provide me some feedback on my PS? Thanks!

 

[Kahr]

I haven´t got the time myself, but there are a long list of intelligent and helpful people on this forum that would definitely help you.

Here´s a thread, exactly the same as your´s, where a bunch of the aforementioned are offering help, just shoot them PMs and you´re bound to get something:

http://forums.studentdoctor.net/showthread.php?t=920806

There´s also doc toothache, a seasoned PS reader and overflowing with experience and willing to help people, please check him out here:

http://forums.studentdoctor.net/showthread.php?t=398535

 

[UCF FINatic]

I will take a look probably tomorrow if you send it to me.

A little about me, I applied and got accepted this past year to two schools. When I applied I had only taken half of the required science classes (I graduated with a degree in business), had a 3.6 overall GPA, 3.3 science GPA, and only 5 hours of job shadowing experience. I still managed to get 3 interviews and 2 acceptances due to exceptional personal statements and secondary letters.

 

[dantemac]

PM it to me and I'll have a look