Diversity Essay Help?

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I'm really, really struggling what to write about in my diversity essay. All my topics have been sort of mentioned in either my personal statement or my activities list. I would seriously appreciate any help or suggestions I can get...

1) Being a first-gen student. But I struggle to figure out what to say about this so probably isn't good. Just immediately came up when I thought of "diverse".
2) Having lots of teaching experiences - tutoring subjects. tutoring MCAT. teaching internship while studying abroad. Peer mentoring. Teaching my parents who don't speak english. I wanted to write about how my communication skills really got good here, helps me to appreciate the different backgrounds of people I meet. Only issue is that these are all activities that I have in my W/A section (but not MME)

In my activities section, for takeaways I did talk about learning to adapt to a new teaching curriculum (abroad one) and collaborating with students when I didn't know the answer (the other stuff) and sharing my own experiences (peer mentoring). But what I didn't talk about was the whole taking the person's background into perspective, being super patient with understanding what he/she knows/doesn't know because they're experiences are different from mine, etc. I think that's what I would stress? Again, important for communication, important for appreciating diversity I guess...?

3) Fitness/nutrition. Idk, lost a good chunk of weight. Really think fitness is important, role it plays in decreasing stress, I personally think it can be used to prevent alot of disease, helped me to find a good life-work balance,

thank youuuu
 
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It's fine for experiences to be mentioned again for the diversity or challenge prompts. Talk about the experience from a different angle. You want to convince folks that you will add something to a future class of students.

I think that any of your three could be used for a diversity prompt, with #1 and #2 being the most obvious. #3 is better for a challenge essay, but in a pinch could be spun for a diversity essay as well (e.g insights that you gained along the way, etc). I'm personally biased towards others who have successfully lost weight, being previously chunky myself. Most med students have never lost a significant amount of weight before, so it can be helpful to learn from others' weight loss journey, especially with the current epidemic. Just my thoughts.
 
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