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Trying to decide which is better:
-I attended a language immersion school for most of my primary education. My teachers were from other countries, and many of our Teaching assistants (also from other countries) lived with my family. I traveled extensively as a child to countries where this language is spoken. I speak various languages, which I have used in my clinical and volunteer work.
-I do extensive work with victims of violence, particularly in correctional facilities. This experience has taught me a lot of empathy towards people in these situations, and about the challenges they face
Thoughts?
Edit: FYI there is no mention of #1 anywhere else in my app. #2 is talked about in activities.
-I attended a language immersion school for most of my primary education. My teachers were from other countries, and many of our Teaching assistants (also from other countries) lived with my family. I traveled extensively as a child to countries where this language is spoken. I speak various languages, which I have used in my clinical and volunteer work.
-I do extensive work with victims of violence, particularly in correctional facilities. This experience has taught me a lot of empathy towards people in these situations, and about the challenges they face
Thoughts?
Edit: FYI there is no mention of #1 anywhere else in my app. #2 is talked about in activities.
