I'll be blunt, but I'm trying to help.
1) It comes across as if you might think you're smarter, more gifted, and more deserving than anyone else that applies to medical school. You might be right, but this does not present the "humility" factor that they look for.
Perhaps a rejection letter will teach you that. It sure as hell taught me. I had to rethink everything about my application, and it paid off. Do not consider it as me wishing you ill, yet think of it as a potential growing experience.
2) Just because you have an extensive vocabulary, doesn't mean you need to use it. The usage of such a vocabulary does not imply intelligence... in fact, it looks like you may be trying too hard to APPEAR smart. If I can see through it, then I promise you that committee members who wade through thousands of applications will 86 your file without a second glance.
In addition, your patient base will not be so gifted in the finer points of the english language. I'm not advocating the use of sloppy english, just simple english.
3) I agree with psipsina. You should not develop a resentment for those who are accepted, as they will become your colleagues in the not-so-distant future.
Develop humility. Have hope. Question yourself, your motives, your attitudes, your goals, your accomplishments, everything! Do you truly want this? Is it because your parents are telling you that you have to be a doctor? What is it ?
Then think... Why didn't I get in? The answer that's hardest to hear is likely the truth. Identify it, fix it, and hopefully you'll get what you want.