final PS review before submission

[zooted]

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Hey guys, I'm gearing up to submit before the end of the day and would like to know if my PS has any glaring holes or weaknesses that I have to fix before I do. I would appreciate it so much if you guys could help with this bc I've basically been slamming my head against a wall for the last 3 weeks lol

 

[Tea Leaf]

I don't mind looking at it!