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Hi Everyone, I need your enthusiastic advises for my personal statement for dental school
I am working as a medical assistant. In the paragraph where I want to describe an experience that made me interested in serving others through Healthcare. I include my experience working as a medical assistant. Some people advised me not to include anything related to medicine so that I can absolutely convince the committee that I, 100%, want to be a dentist. To me, I just want to convince the committee that I care for people, I help people, and this helps me advance my healthcare experience in serving others. I also include a paragraph where I show my interest in being a dentistry via shadowing different offices and general dentists. I saw a different between dentistry and medicine; and my best ability to help people in dentistry compare to medicine
Thank you for all your help and I really appreciate your time!
NL
I am working as a medical assistant. In the paragraph where I want to describe an experience that made me interested in serving others through Healthcare. I include my experience working as a medical assistant. Some people advised me not to include anything related to medicine so that I can absolutely convince the committee that I, 100%, want to be a dentist. To me, I just want to convince the committee that I care for people, I help people, and this helps me advance my healthcare experience in serving others. I also include a paragraph where I show my interest in being a dentistry via shadowing different offices and general dentists. I saw a different between dentistry and medicine; and my best ability to help people in dentistry compare to medicine
Thank you for all your help and I really appreciate your time!
NL