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Help critique my personal statement!

Discussion in 'Pre-Dental' started by matthewc, May 13, 2008.

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  1. matthewc

    matthewc New Member
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    This is my first time applying and I'm not sure if I did the PS right ...

    I did mine like a story ... kind of focused on motivation but not enough on qualification. And I am at ~4700 characters so I need to cut something out but don't know what. Any help is appreciated.

    I can send u my draft if you PM me. Thanks!
     
    #1 matthewc, May 13, 2008
  2. doc3232

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    Sure, pm me.
     
    #2 doc3232, May 13, 2008
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    I could do a quick review. PM me the essay if you want. And I went ahead and commented on all the essays on DMDstudent.com. You can now see whether to value my judgment on essay writing.
     
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    You can PM your statement too if you want another opinion:)
     
    #4 mmguirguis, May 14, 2008
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    you can PM me too if you want
     
    #5 mikexima, May 14, 2008
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    Pardon me, I do not mean to sound pessimistic however, I would suggest that you do not send your PS to other people unless they are Dentists or already in Dental school. Just a word of advice. Look for a user called doc toothache he is a Dentist, he gave a wonderful critique of mine. Good Luck
     
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    #6 OMFS08, May 14, 2008
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    Thanks for all the input guys!
     
    #7 matthewc, May 15, 2008
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    PM me if u still help.
     
    #8 AdaAda87, May 16, 2008
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