Help critique my personal statement!

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matthewc

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This is my first time applying and I'm not sure if I did the PS right ...

I did mine like a story ... kind of focused on motivation but not enough on qualification. And I am at ~4700 characters so I need to cut something out but don't know what. Any help is appreciated.

I can send u my draft if you PM me. Thanks!
 
I could do a quick review. PM me the essay if you want. And I went ahead and commented on all the essays on DMDstudent.com. You can now see whether to value my judgment on essay writing.
 
You can PM your statement too if you want another opinion🙂
 
Pardon me, I do not mean to sound pessimistic however, I would suggest that you do not send your PS to other people unless they are Dentists or already in Dental school. Just a word of advice. Look for a user called doc toothache he is a Dentist, he gave a wonderful critique of mine. Good Luck
 
Thanks for all the input guys!
 
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