Help critique my personal statement!

[matthewc]

This is my first time applying and I'm not sure if I did the PS right ...

I did mine like a story ... kind of focused on motivation but not enough on qualification. And I am at ~4700 characters so I need to cut something out but don't know what. Any help is appreciated.

I can send u my draft if you PM me. Thanks!

 

[doc3232]

Sure, pm me.

 

[UCSF2012]

I could do a quick review. PM me the essay if you want. And I went ahead and commented on all the essays on DMDstudent.com. You can now see whether to value my judgment on essay writing.

 

[mmguirguis]

You can PM your statement too if you want another opinion🙂

 

[mikexima]

you can PM me too if you want

 

[OMFS08]

Pardon me, I do not mean to sound pessimistic however, I would suggest that you do not send your PS to other people unless they are Dentists or already in Dental school. Just a word of advice. Look for a user called doc toothache he is a Dentist, he gave a wonderful critique of mine. Good Luck

 

[matthewc]

Thanks for all the input guys!

 

[AdaAda87]

PM me if u still help.