Help trimming down personal statement?

[bears1992]

Would anyone be willing to take a look at my personal statement and let me know what parts would be best to cut down on? Right now it is 1300 words and I need to cut to down to 890ish words for AACOMAS. Just FYI, my technical writing is great (engineering major) but my descriptive writing is horrible (engineering major). Thanks!!!!!!

 

[AspiringD0c]

You can PM to me if you want, I've got a couple of others to look at, but I can look over it by Thursday evening!

 

[bears1992]

You can PM to me if you want, I've got a couple of others to look at, but I can look over it by Thursday evening!

Thanks! I'll send you a Google-doc link.

 

[cjcarter]

+1

 

[Mr. Babe]

I can look at it

 

[sharpstickie]

yuppers