Help with work/activities

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white skates + white coat
Dec 20, 2010
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I am kind of worried about what I have written for my work/activities. I heard arguments for both bullet points and paragraphs, and paragraphs ended up feeling more natural for me to write, but I am second guessing my entries now and am hoping someone might be able to offer some advice. Is there anyone who is willing to read some of what I have and tell me if I have done them completely wrong or if I need to rework them in any way? I am hoping to submit my app within the next few days, I just can't bear to do it with the thought that everything could be completely and irrevocably bad.

Ugh I just reread that and realize I sound completely neurotic. I promise I'm not... :oops: