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Hi guys,
Would love some feedback from those more experienced than I about this idea for an application hook.
I was a poor student throughout high school due to not understanding the inherent worth of information and learning. Seeing many of my friends (most of whom came from lowsocioeconomic and educational backgrounds) drop out, get addicted to drugs, etc was a strong motivating force for me to better myself as a student in university and demonstrated to me the value of education in bettering peoples lives. That combined with my reaction to a serendipitous emergency and a inherent interest in human biology, steered me towards medicine: an intellectually stimulating field that I saw then as applied biological research with potentially large teaching components (both patients and students)
I tutored throughout college, both formally (through an organization targeting disadvantaged students) and informally and will have 2 years as a peace corps advanced chemistry teacher in an underserved country by the time of application.
In my future career, I want to indulge my love of learning and teaching in an effort to mitigate health disparities and promote health care equity.
sGPA: 3.95
MCAT: 524
All required ECs above average in both amount and quality except for leadership.
I would love criticisms of this hook. Sorry for the long post 🙂
Would love some feedback from those more experienced than I about this idea for an application hook.
I was a poor student throughout high school due to not understanding the inherent worth of information and learning. Seeing many of my friends (most of whom came from lowsocioeconomic and educational backgrounds) drop out, get addicted to drugs, etc was a strong motivating force for me to better myself as a student in university and demonstrated to me the value of education in bettering peoples lives. That combined with my reaction to a serendipitous emergency and a inherent interest in human biology, steered me towards medicine: an intellectually stimulating field that I saw then as applied biological research with potentially large teaching components (both patients and students)
I tutored throughout college, both formally (through an organization targeting disadvantaged students) and informally and will have 2 years as a peace corps advanced chemistry teacher in an underserved country by the time of application.
In my future career, I want to indulge my love of learning and teaching in an effort to mitigate health disparities and promote health care equity.
sGPA: 3.95
MCAT: 524
All required ECs above average in both amount and quality except for leadership.
I would love criticisms of this hook. Sorry for the long post 🙂