Is anybody willing to look over my personal statement?

[alera91]

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Hey guys, this is my first time posting on SDN (I've been lurking the forums for some time, though). Obviously I'm a current applicant but struggling with my PS so I thought I'd reach out to the lovely SDN community for critiquing and advice 🙂 If anybody is willing to look over it, please let me know!

 

[alera91]

bump!

 

[SpaceHamsterBoo]

yes i am willing 🙂