Is this the proper way to write this sentence?

[TheEugenius]

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"The program I volunteer with aims to slow or prevent dementia in elderly long-term inpatients."

That bold part is what I am concerned about, since I am not sure how to properly say it.

Thanks

 

[BigBoss]

Yeah that’s fine.


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[DrRiker]

The program I volunteer with aims to slow or prevent dementia in elderly long-term inpatient populations

A possible alternative. Yours is fine.

 

[katie24seven]

Sounds like a cool program, good for you!🙂