Looking for Personal Statement Help!

[deleted1053451]

Hello,
I'm currently struggling to write my personal statement, as I'm sure many pre-MD students are, and was hoping for some feedback on my rough draft.
Writing isn't my strong suit and I welcome any advice! Thank you and best of luck to everyone in the same position!

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[patnic511]

Hey, for anonymity, it's probably best to not include your PS as an attachment! You can DM it to people who offer to read it, and there's also a thread for PS readers *~*~Official Personal Statement Guide and Reader List 2020-2021~*~*

 

[squids82]

I agree with @patnic511.

If you PM a link to a google doc with comments turned on, I can give some feedback.

 

[LunaOri]

Your writing isn't bad at all, but the PS is rather generic; your stories need to be stronger. I always recommend reading your essay out loud to a few different people, and getting their reactions.

 

[deleted1053451]

Hey, for anonymity, it's probably best to not include your PS as an attachment! You can DM it to people who offer to read it, and there's also a thread for PS readers *~*~Official Personal Statement Guide and Reader List 2020-2021~*~*

Thank you, I'm still new to SDN. I appreciate the thread you sent!

 

[deleted1053451]

Your writing isn't bad at all, but the PS is rather generic; your stories need to be stronger. I always recommend reading your essay out loud to a few different people, and getting their reactions.

I've exhausted my family lol but I will try to convince some friends to provide further feedback. Thank you for your advice!