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Hello,
I'm currently struggling to write my personal statement, as I'm sure many pre-MD students are, and was hoping for some feedback on my rough draft.
Writing isn't my strong suit and I welcome any advice! Thank you and best of luck to everyone in the same position! :)
 
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I agree with @patnic511.

If you PM a link to a google doc with comments turned on, I can give some feedback.
 
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Your writing isn't bad at all, but the PS is rather generic; your stories need to be stronger. I always recommend reading your essay out loud to a few different people, and getting their reactions.
 
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Your writing isn't bad at all, but the PS is rather generic; your stories need to be stronger. I always recommend reading your essay out loud to a few different people, and getting their reactions.
I've exhausted my family lol but I will try to convince some friends to provide further feedback. Thank you for your advice!
 
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