mt. sinai secondary--any essay readers out there?

[saiyagirl]

anybody willing to read my essay for one of the Mt. Sinai essays? the essay question is "describe a way in which you have taken initiative or exhibited leadership."

it fits in the space given...if i use a 9.5 font! let me know if you think i could shorten it in any way. i'm horrible at shortening.

 

[saiyagirl]

help?

 

[eurotrash]

yeah, i'll read it, how do oyu want to send it to me?

 

[jot]

i'll take a look if you want (aplied there already) - my e-mail is in my profile i believe.

 

[chopsuey]

i'll read it if you want....but my real reason for posting was to say that mine was in a really small font,too....just make sure that you've made it as concise as possible so it's worth their time to read the tiny font!