General Admissions & OTCAS Need help with personal statement!

[OT2020kelsey]

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Hi everyone! I have my first draft of my personal statement completed. I was wondering if anyone (especially those who are good with English/writing) could read it over! I am not sure if I am including too much personal information or what else would be valuable to add. Thanks in advance!

 

[OThopefully183]

Hi everyone! I have my first draft of my personal statement completed. I was wondering if anyone (especially those who are good with English/writing) could read it over! I am not sure if I am including too much personal information or what else would be valuable to add. Thanks in advance!

Sure thing send it over. Though just a disclaimer I'm more of a content person than grammar. Also is this for general OTCAS statement?

 

[lalasing]

feel free to dm me and I can take a look at it too 🙂