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thanks, bud. reading my first post back, i made it confusing. but let me be clear that I'd be the black, gay friend who grew up in relative poverty/drugs/violence. therefore, not exactly sure how to frame THAT without coming across as "hey look at HOW DIVERSE I AM!!!!!!!!!!!"
also, how does someone from my background "reflect on an experience with diversity" when my vision of diversity would be white suburbia because that is what is foreign to me?
I agree with you that it can be a "look at what makes me cool" essay. And in that case, is it dismissive of me to not remark on my socioeconomic/cultural diversity?
All the things confuse me at this point in the admissions process lol
What about stating right upfront that your background is a cliche, so not particularly diverse to your experience. And then talk about exactly what you said here -- about being the black friend, the gay friend, the lower SES friend -- then on getting past that cliche with your friends and colleagues and helping them see the individual, not the cliched stereotype
That's fine, but you could also just mention your race, orientation and economic status in passing as something that inspired you in your passion for stamp collecting, juggling or modern dance. As was mentioned above "diversity" is not a word meant to be confined to racial, ethnic or orientation matters. Writing about "educating" someone from a "dominant race" (OPs words) is exactly what you don't want to do. At the end of the day you need to be a "good fit" for the school. They want someone with cool hobbies and a unique perspective, not someone out to iron out social evils. Race is a positive if it brings a unique perspective. It is a negative if it potentially impacts relationships between med students or if you paint one group as "dominant" or prone to stereotype. Because by doing that you are making a group out as the bad guy, which may be true from your perspective but maybe rubs the reader the wrong way.What about stating right upfront that your background is a cliche, so not particularly diverse to your experience. And then talk about exactly what you said here -- about being the black friend, the gay friend, the lower SES friend -- then on getting past that cliche with your friends and colleagues and helping them see the individual, not the cliched stereotype