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You should not post your entire PS online... for people might borrow parts or use some of it. Rather, consider Messaging it to those who would be willing to read it for you.
 
I would read it and give you my opinion. I am actually in the process of writing my essay too but I won't copy any since it my unique experience. I can let you read mines too once completed! Pm me