Personal Statement Critique Needed!

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doctorinthesky

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Hey all,

I've already submitted my personal statement to my prehealth committee, and I had shown it to a professor and a few other people, and they said the content was okay but it lacked flow, some words were inappropriate etc., so I wanted to make a few edits and really need help with what exactly needs to be improved.
If anyone would be so kind as to help critique my personal statement it would help me a great deal!

PS: I'm an international applicant, 3.93 GPA, 514 MCAT.

Thanks so much!
 
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