Personal Statement Critique

[ahawke100]

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Hi all!

I've completed a first rough draft of my personal statement and would much appreciate those who know what they're looking for to give me some feedback. Before I proceed with any further tweaking of it, I'd like some honest feedback.


Thanks in advance guys!

 

[DoctorSynthesis]

Hi all!

I've completed a first rough draft of my personal statement and would much appreciate those who know what they're looking for to give me some feedback. Before I proceed with any further tweaking of it, I'd like some honest feedback.


Thanks in advance guys!

Not a great writer but willing to read it if you PM me. I can tell you what I think about your ideas. I got in with the personal statement I wrote.

 

[Hippogriff]

Definitely willing to help. Just PM me for some feedback.

 

[MightBeACylon439]

I'll take a looksie, probably take me a bit to get back to you.

 

[DoctorSynthesis]

Hi all!

I've completed a first rough draft of my personal statement and would much appreciate those who know what they're looking for to give me some feedback. Before I proceed with any further tweaking of it, I'd like some honest feedback.


Thanks in advance guys!

Sent some comments.

 

[ahawke100]

@DoctorSynthesis and @Hippogriff, thank you both so much for the valuable feedback. Many of the concerns you both addressed were ones that I had as well. I've got some work to do, and I'll definitely incorporate both of your suggestions. I may be messaging you both with questions if that's ok!

 

[Hippogriff]

Sure, feel free to PM me with additional questions!

 

[DoctorSynthesis]

@DoctorSynthesis and @Hippogriff, thank you both so much for the valuable feedback. Many of the concerns you both addressed were ones that I had as well. I've got some work to do, and I'll definitely incorporate both of your suggestions. I may be messaging you both with questions if that's ok!

More then glad to discuss further. Please note that those are my opinions!

 

[fkt24]

I will take a look at it. I am in no means a grammar nazi so I will be looking for content and letting you know of any glaring grammar corrections. PM if you like, I will try to get it back ASAP