Personal Statement Critique

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ahawke100

ahawke100

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Hi all!

I've completed a first rough draft of my personal statement and would much appreciate those who know what they're looking for to give me some feedback. Before I proceed with any further tweaking of it, I'd like some honest feedback.


Thanks in advance guys!
 
ahawke100 said:
Hi all!

I've completed a first rough draft of my personal statement and would much appreciate those who know what they're looking for to give me some feedback. Before I proceed with any further tweaking of it, I'd like some honest feedback.


Thanks in advance guys!
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Not a great writer but willing to read it if you PM me. I can tell you what I think about your ideas. I got in with the personal statement I wrote.
 
ahawke100 said:
Hi all!

I've completed a first rough draft of my personal statement and would much appreciate those who know what they're looking for to give me some feedback. Before I proceed with any further tweaking of it, I'd like some honest feedback.


Thanks in advance guys!
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Sent some comments.
 
@DoctorSynthesis and @Hippogriff, thank you both so much for the valuable feedback. Many of the concerns you both addressed were ones that I had as well. I've got some work to do, and I'll definitely incorporate both of your suggestions. I may be messaging you both with questions if that's ok!
 
ahawke100 said:
@DoctorSynthesis and @Hippogriff, thank you both so much for the valuable feedback. Many of the concerns you both addressed were ones that I had as well. I've got some work to do, and I'll definitely incorporate both of your suggestions. I may be messaging you both with questions if that's ok!
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More then glad to discuss further. Please note that those are my opinions!
 
I will take a look at it. I am in no means a grammar nazi so I will be looking for content and letting you know of any glaring grammar corrections. PM if you like, I will try to get it back ASAP
 
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