Personal Statement help please?

[DentistWanaB]

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Hi everyone. I'm new here.

Is anyone willing to give my personal statement essay a once-over and provide me some feedback? I literally worked on it all day and I'm so frustrated over it. I wrote too much and I'm trying to figure out where I can trim it down and edit. I feel like I still have a lot of work to do because it just sounds like total crap to me and I'm running out of ideas to do to make it flow better. 🙁

Also, does anyone know what's the average number of schools students apply to thru the AADSAS? I wasn't prepared to see how costly applying to even a few schools is.

Any response is greatly appreciated.

 

[rollredroll]

i'll take a look. pm me and i'll give you my email address

 

[Hopefuldental]

I'll be happy to look at it. You can PM it to me

 

[grami001]

Ill gladly help you. Just PM it

 

[Slimfast]

Hey don't stress out too much about it- the essay is not as important as your grades, DAT, research... etc

I am applying to 11 schools, but it seems like most of my friends are applying to 14+

 

[aphistis]

Hey don't stress out too much about it- the essay is not as important as your grades, DAT, research... etc

I am applying to 11 schools, but it seems like most of my friends are applying to 14+

I disagree. Between two otherwise equal candidates, one with a strong application essay and the other listed as fourth author in some obscure basic science study, the good essay will get the interview every time.

 

[DentalGrad]

You can PM it to me. I'm happy to give you feedback.

 

[americanpierg]

boy...itd suck if this essay ended up at adcom offices all across the country wouldnt it