Personal Statement help.

[awood11]

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So I have been having a little it of a rough time writing my personal statement. I have some good shadowing experiences and I currently am doing tissue engineering research, both of which I am trying to bring into my PS. I just dont think these experiences are unique enough. I am a middle class white dude and I was thinking about writing something like "I know im a middle class caucasion man, but....". I think this would be unique and help me stand out, but would this be too upfront and abrupt?

Thanks!

 

[unluckyadhessiveness]

I was thinking about writing something like "I know im a middle class caucasion man, but...."

Yeah that's gonna be a no from me dawg.

 

[awood11]

Yeah that's gonna be a no from me dawg.

You dont think it would be bold and unique?

 

[907914]

You dont think it would be bold and unique?

It certainly would be. But bold and unique is not necessarily a good quality. Most dictators have bold and unique ideas.

 

[deleted972488]

It’s not bold and unique. It’s boring and takes up unnecessary space.