personal statement help

[komradrobot]

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i just had someone tell me my personal statement reeked of insincerity and superfluous language. i dont know what to do 🙁

 

[wantVCUdental]

i just had someone tell me my personal statement reeked of insincerity and superfluous language. i dont know what to do 🙁

Get someone else to read it, and ask yourself how you can improve on it.

 

[UndergradGuy7]

Who did you ask to read it?

Ask for more opinions. Everyone has different ideas of what a good statement is. But it is good they told you, I would rather get honest feedback than yea its great when it isn't.

 

[doc toothache]

i just had someone tell me my personal statement reeked of insincerity and superfluous language. i dont know what to do 🙁

It could possibly be true.