K komradrobot Full Member 10+ Year Member Joined Oct 11, 2009 Messages 139 Reaction score 0 Jun 14, 2010 #1 Members don't see this ad. i just had someone tell me my personal statement reeked of insincerity and superfluous language. i dont know what to do 🙁
Members don't see this ad. i just had someone tell me my personal statement reeked of insincerity and superfluous language. i dont know what to do 🙁
W wantVCUdental Full Member 10+ Year Member Joined Aug 6, 2009 Messages 982 Reaction score 1 Jun 14, 2010 #2 komradrobot said: i just had someone tell me my personal statement reeked of insincerity and superfluous language. i dont know what to do 🙁 Click to expand... Get someone else to read it, and ask yourself how you can improve on it.
komradrobot said: i just had someone tell me my personal statement reeked of insincerity and superfluous language. i dont know what to do 🙁 Click to expand... Get someone else to read it, and ask yourself how you can improve on it.
U UndergradGuy7 Full Member 15+ Year Member Joined Jun 24, 2007 Messages 897 Reaction score 2 Jun 14, 2010 #3 Who did you ask to read it? Ask for more opinions. Everyone has different ideas of what a good statement is. But it is good they told you, I would rather get honest feedback than yea its great when it isn't.
Who did you ask to read it? Ask for more opinions. Everyone has different ideas of what a good statement is. But it is good they told you, I would rather get honest feedback than yea its great when it isn't.
doc toothache Full Member 15+ Year Member Joined Jan 17, 2006 Messages 8,521 Reaction score 2,797 Jun 14, 2010 #4 komradrobot said: i just had someone tell me my personal statement reeked of insincerity and superfluous language. i dont know what to do 🙁 Click to expand... It could possibly be true.
komradrobot said: i just had someone tell me my personal statement reeked of insincerity and superfluous language. i dont know what to do 🙁 Click to expand... It could possibly be true.