Hey guys,
I have written two personal statements. One is very cookie-cutter. It lists the holy trifecta that most med students have of research, community service, and clinical service, and how each have influenced me in my decision to go to medical school. It feels almost as if I've rehashed my W/A but with anecdotes and analysis. Very boring, meets all the requirements, and won't stand out at all. I imagine it to be neutral - won't help, won't hurt(hopefully).
The other one is much more real and personal. I originally wrote it more as a diary entry type thing, and I was completely honest and I wrote it in my own voice. However, it is much more risky. I am unsure if I've even answered the prompt with it. I am not sure which would be better. Does anybody have any thoughts on this dilemma?
I was hoping that somebody could take a look at both of them, and tell me their thoughts. I understand that there is a Personal Statement readers thread, but I am not looking for an edit - just a very quick read through to form an opinion of which of the two would be better.
I have written two personal statements. One is very cookie-cutter. It lists the holy trifecta that most med students have of research, community service, and clinical service, and how each have influenced me in my decision to go to medical school. It feels almost as if I've rehashed my W/A but with anecdotes and analysis. Very boring, meets all the requirements, and won't stand out at all. I imagine it to be neutral - won't help, won't hurt(hopefully).
The other one is much more real and personal. I originally wrote it more as a diary entry type thing, and I was completely honest and I wrote it in my own voice. However, it is much more risky. I am unsure if I've even answered the prompt with it. I am not sure which would be better. Does anybody have any thoughts on this dilemma?
I was hoping that somebody could take a look at both of them, and tell me their thoughts. I understand that there is a Personal Statement readers thread, but I am not looking for an edit - just a very quick read through to form an opinion of which of the two would be better.