Personal Statement.. How much time is everyone spending?

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Just curious to see how much time people are actually spending on their PS. Accumulatively, I think I spent about 4 hours on it over a 6 month time span. Im done with a very preliminary draft. But for some reason I get the feeling that people generally spend alot more time on this essay.
 
I started it in January (took about an hour), put it away until April, after some friends did some editing for me, when I fixed some minor points (30 minutes). In May, I had a couple of SDNers read it for content and fixed mistakes (45 minutes). Now, I'm done. Total time: 2hrs 15mins
 
The personal essay can make or break an applicants chances. I have spoken to many admissions directors and all of them have said, they have turned down applicants due to their essays even when their stats were high....they also said they have granted interviews to low stat applicants and that the essay was what swayed them to do so.

So word to the wise... take the personal essay very seriously and do your very best with it. Let various people read it, let your advisors read it, let teh english department head read it, in other words get lots of feedback on it and polish it to perfection!!!!!!!!!!
 
Amy B said:
The personal essay can make or break an applicants chances. I have spoken to many admissions directors and all of them have said, they have turned down applicants due to their essays even when their stats were high....they also said they have granted interviews to low stat applicants and that the essay was what swayed them to do so.

So word to the wise... take the personal essay very seriously and do your very best with it. Let various people read it, let your advisors read it, let teh english department head read it, in other words get lots of feedback on it and polish it to perfection!!!!!!!!!!

I have to agree with Amy B. I spent hours upon hours on my essay. In fact, I think I went through 11 drafts until I was happy with it. By the time I was done it didn't look nor sound the essay I had originally wrote.
 
I'll be honest: I've looked over my essay a lot -- I'd say at least 10 horus of work so far. Right now I'm having more people look at it (from SDN, and friends). I'm not taking it lightly at alllllll....maybe I'm just OCD...who knows
 
i'm applying to dental school... but it's the same general statement... and i've probably put 2 hours into mine and will put maybe another hour in before it's complete.
 
Holy cow.

I can't even imagine having spent 3 hours or under on my essay. Especially because writing is not my strong pont, and it doesn't come naturally to me. I outline and outline and outline very carefully, and then start writing. Eventually, I turn out something that's okay, but it takes me a lot of work.

I went through a lot of drafts. If there's one thing I was compulsive about during the process, it was my PS. This is mainly because most schools will bring it up during your interview. Some interviews are closed file, but if they are open file, chances are that the interviewer will ask you about your PS. At some places, my interviewers knew my file like the back of their hands...they had read the PS very carefully, and it was important to have a carefully constructed one.

However, you know yourself best. I'm not being sarcastic. I know people who can sit down for 2 hours, focus, and turn out something really really good. I was definitely not one of those people. 😛
 
Honestly, I'm not completely sure. I wrote one draft late last year and completely trashed that one. I started with a new one early this year and have worked on bits and pieces of it since then (quite a bit more often recently).

It feels like I've spent too much time on it at this point - but at the same time I wonder if it is enough. 😉
 
I'm not sure how much time exactly... probably a total of four or five hours. I wrote a first draft, revised it, had my husband read it (and say he hated it) had my sister read it and edit it, and then had my father in law read it and edited it, took all edits into consideration, rewrote it, had my husband read it again, he edited a few small things, and then I sent it in.
 
TinyFish said:
Holy cow.

I can't even imagine having spent 3 hours or under on my essay. Especially because writing is not my strong pont, and it doesn't come naturally to me. I outline and outline and outline very carefully, and then start writing. Eventually, I turn out something that's okay, but it takes me a lot of work.
No kidding; writing is my strong point, and I would spend weeks pouring over every detail of that essay, have all my friends and faculty advisors read and comment, bring it to the writing center, etc... the personal statement seems like such an important part of the application, there is no way I would take it lightly.
 
I probably spent more than 30 hours on that bitch. But the last major revision was totally different, and came out in about 45 minutes. If you get it right the first time, more power to you.
 
dbhvt said:
I probably spent more than 30 hours on that bitch. But the last major revision was totally different, and came out in about 45 minutes. If you get it right the first time, more power to you.

Dude, I spend hours just trying to figure out what I want to say. So I am right along with you on this.

I take weeks of concentrated effort (subtracting the procrastination because I hate writing 😉 ) to produce a PS. And the Final verison is always way different that the first version
 
The importance of the PS is hotly debated around here. According to non-SDN "experts" that I have spoken to (professors, health professions advisors, etc) the PS is a relatively unimportant part of your application. ADCOM members probably spend only five minutes reading it, if they read it at all. Maybe they read it right before they interview you to get some idea of who they will be talking to. I am sure that others will jump in and say how wrong I am about that, but, like anything else in this process, I'm sure it depends upon not only the school, but also the individual ADCOM member(s).

My philosophy: I'm sure a bad PS can hurt your [otherwise good] application, and I'm sure that an excellent PS can help your [otherwise bad] application. While, like everything else, I am striving for excellence, I'm not trying to be too cute, so that, in the end, I will probably have a solid PS that may not be as flowery and ornate (telling stories about helping poor people in Africa, etc) as those of others, but answers the question(s) asked in an easy-to-read manner.

Common sense tells me that a solid and unique, but not excellent and worthy of the pulitzer prize PS will not hurt your chances for admission. I think that such a PS can be written in 2-3 hours (even though I've spent more than that on mine because I feel very constrained by the 5000 character limit and keep changing what I am including and what I am leaving out.)
 
thes_hunter said:
And the Final verison is always way different that the first version

Once I write something, I have a difficult time coming up with anything else to say. (I'm not a very good writer) So basically, other than editing for grammer, and having other people recommend better sentence structure, and taking out paragraphs completely to shorten my essay, my final draft always ends up being similar to my initial draft.
 
I think I've worked on it for maybe 5-8 hours. I don't write everyday. I just write when I have an idea in my head. Í think the hardest part is trying to edit the PS. It is also really hard to edit when I get different opinions about the paper.
 
I'm a fairly good writer. My undergrad consisted of me writing essay after essay, paper after paper, as I majored in a writing intensive subject. I knew exactly what I wanted to say in my PS (explain my relatively recent decision to be a physician), so it didn't take me long. The corrections I needed to make were nothing major (grammar, moving a few paragraphs around, etc). I'm happy with it, and I wrote it in under 3 hours. However, I'm one of those people that can sit down, focus, and crank something good out in a short amount of time. I think the time spent on these things is just going to be very person-specific. Maybe we should start a poll...
 
Wow so we have people from all across the spectrum. I think i spent about 3 hours actually writing it but way more hours sitting around comtemplating in my down time. I think its a good time for me to send it out for opinions..
 
noelleruckman said:
Once I write something, I have a difficult time coming up with anything else to say. (I'm not a very good writer) So basically, other than editing for grammer, and having other people recommend better sentence structure, and taking out paragraphs completely to shorten my essay, my final draft always ends up being similar to my initial draft.


I have an N on my Written section and I totally deserve it.

But I normally have word dribble for my first draft. When I go back and look at it and compare it to my original thesis, I am always like WTF did I mean by these paragraphs?! 😱

So I end up trying to hammer it back into a format that tries to support my thesis and has a unified logic flow.

Maybe this is wrong because I have seen several other people say they did little mini essays in each paragraph talking about a different experience in each.

I know when I re-write my PS this time... I will consider that approach. Since I feel I need to cover:

My experience with the ARC both with direct aid to the people who had been evacuated and also when I started overseeing the operation of distribution centers.

Why I switched careers.

Why I am not an artist even though I have a BFA.

What makes me an excellent dedicated canidate for their limited spots.

So maybe I need to have the seperate little mini essays approach. Or maybe I will just copy that Panda guys PS's. 😀
 
I had an N on mine as well! 🙂 I'm glad that no one seemed to care. I went back and read mine recently (I applied last year) and was quite embarrassed. I just have a hard time converting thoughts to paper (and sometimes even to words)
 
noelleruckman said:
I had an N on mine as well! 🙂 I'm glad that no one seemed to care. I went back and read mine recently (I applied last year) and was quite embarrassed. I just have a hard time converting thoughts to paper (and sometimes even to words)


I don't know if I will look at last years, because I wrote it the night before I needed to get on a plane for Baton Rouge. :scared:


I am thinking this year I might pay to get some professional editting advice, but I don't know yet.
 
thes_hunter said:
I have an N on my Written section and I totally deserve it.

But I normally have word dribble for my first draft. When I go back and look at it and compare it to my original thesis, I am always like WTF did I mean by these paragraphs?! 😱

So I end up trying to hammer it back into a format that tries to support my thesis and has a unified logic flow.

Maybe this is wrong because I have seen several other people say they did little mini essays in each paragraph talking about a different experience in each.

I know when I re-write my PS this time... I will consider that approach. Since I feel I need to cover:

My experience with the ARC both with direct aid to the people who had been evacuated and also when I started overseeing the operation of distribution centers.

Why I switched careers.

Why I am not an artist even though I have a BFA.

What makes me an excellent dedicated canidate for their limited spots.

So maybe I need to have the seperate little mini essays approach. Or maybe I will just copy that Panda guys PS's. 😀

I think that may be way too many things to cover in your PS (if that's what you were planning on doing). IMO, just pick a couple and expand them.
 
My problem isn't really what an editor can fix. I'm just not real creative, so nothing I write is very enjoyable to read. Oh well.
 
Grammatical or spelling errors = AMCAS essay suicide.

The rest is semantic. Don't be too arrogant, coy, or silly. It's a professional essay. I recommend avoiding all jokes.

Khanal007 said:
I'll be honest: I've looked over my essay a lot -- I'd say at least 10 horus of work so far. Right now I'm having more people look at it (from SDN, and friends). I'm not taking it lightly at alllllll....maybe I'm just OCD...who knows
 
Let's see here:

Time spent doing free-writes, working on topics: 10 hours
Time spent with first three drafts: 3 hours
Sent first "final" draft to editing service: $100.00

Final draft back.
Had it read by: 4 people.
Re-organized essay: 2 hours
Had it read by: 3 people.
Little changes to essay: 1 hour
One more check by: My husband

Time to type into AMCAS: 30 minutes

Total time: 16.5 hours, at the computer!
Cost: Time & $100.00
# People Editing: 8

Feeling good about my personal statement: Priceless

THIS THING WAS A BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYOTCH!!! :luck:
 
About 20 hrs here. I highly recommend giving it to a writing major or writing instructor to edit for phrasing and sentence structure. I gave my PS to my writing instructor, and he was nice enough to also give to a colleague.
 
I spent about 2 hrs on it and only had my dad read it over.
 
I couldn't truly give an estimate, but I know it is on the high end. Of course, that is for the two different essays for TMDSAS and AMCAS. I did a 2 hour word dribble (I like that term, thesHunter, because that is exactly what it was!) just to get everything down and then started editing.

I'm on something like rev 6 for the TMDSAS one and rev 5 on AMCAS. I had hubby edit it between my edits - though he hated most of what I did (one classic comment back from him, "Are you aware you used the word but 37 times, 6 times in one paragraph?"). Now I'm having my journalist (and now published author!) friend look at it. These are so painful!!!
 
I've been working on it every weekend for a few months, probably 24 hours of staring at it, and about 3 hours writing. I'm so jaded I just can't look at it from a fresh perspective.

I have a bit of humor in it, but I feel it's tasteful.
 
I'm not at that stage yet, but I would think that the personal statement should be given, by far, the most time of the entire application. Definitely at least 36 hours total. Of course writing a first draft won't take too long, but tailoring it to perfection should take hours and hours and hours over the span of several days or weeks.
 
I'm not the best at writing, and I started my PS about three weeks ago... I have 8 versions of it already, and I'm still not satisfied. 😳 I should probably give up considering they only take about 90 secs to read it.
 
saffronrain said:
I'm not the best at writing, and I started my PS about three weeks ago... I have 8 versions of it already, and I'm still not satisfied. 😳 I should probably give up considering they only take about 90 secs to read it.

90 secs is all you have to make an impression to all the schools you are applying. Make it count!
 
I have been PMed about this and thought I would tell you all what I told them...

The personal essay is one of the MOST important parts of your application. We ALL have good grades, we ALL have ECEs and good MCAT scores,ect... BUT it is the personal essay that sets us apart from all the rest of the applicants. It is what makes an adcom say...."WOW we have to meet this person." That is why it can make or break getting an interview invite.
 
nebbione said:
Grammatical or spelling errors = AMCAS essay suicide.

The rest is semantic. Don't be too arrogant, coy, or silly. It's a professional essay. I recommend avoiding all jokes.


This is a professional essay for entry into a profession in which a sense of humor can be invaluable. Avoid all jokes? Definitely not if a joke here and there is typical of your personality, I would say. Just plan on writing a meaningful, sincere essay discussing something of real value in your life--humor can help portray that.

...as for me, I spent 1-2 hours on it a couple months ago, have since gone back to it and am still pleased. If you're having trouble thinking of how to focus your essay, think about what your friends and acquaintances have tended to note about you in the past. Were they enamored with a particular thing you've done or a particular personality trait that distinctively finds its roots in an event of the past? Is there a decent true story about yourself that you've always had a knack for telling?
 
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