Personal Statement review?

[Teeths]

Would anyone mind reviewing my personal statement?

I've actually had somewhat of a difficult time writing it as I've already written a few and scraped them all for my final product. I tried to make it 'me' by putting a humorous element to it rather than being so uptight and untrue to myself.

Any comments on it would be great! Thanks 🙂

 

[Kahr]

PM doc toothache, and check out his thread:

http://forums.studentdoctor.net/showthread.php?t=398535&highlight=doc+toothache

 

[ilikepancakes]

i can look at it

 

[SSD1]

I can help! Let me know!

 

[Lane138]

PM me. I've already read a few other people's essays and submitted my application in a week ago. (i'm also a history major)