Personal Statement

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I have done 3 drafts of my personal statement for this year cycle application. I am a post bacc but my program is not the best, as they don't offer the student as much help as i would had hoped. I was wondering if anybody had any ideas on whom i should have read my 3rd draft of my personal statement to get a really good idea if i am on the right track. i had a fellow post bacc read it and he said it sounded fine, but i want to be able to make it sound phenomenal.

Has anybody have any experience one of those site that offer to critiques it?

Thanks!