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Hello, I need guidance regarding Personal Statement.
Heres my scenario :
My goal is medicine but I have low GPA (3.24) so applying to Post Bac Pre-Med program. Health issues destroyed my GPA but is also the major reason I became motivated towards medicine. Is anyone willing to read and critique on my rough draft? I want honest advice about the content and also my writing skills that aren't great. The essay needs to be limited to 500-800 words only. I want specific advice on what to edit and cut out since I have one and half page long essay.
I really appreciate your help in this matter.
Heres my scenario :
My goal is medicine but I have low GPA (3.24) so applying to Post Bac Pre-Med program. Health issues destroyed my GPA but is also the major reason I became motivated towards medicine. Is anyone willing to read and critique on my rough draft? I want honest advice about the content and also my writing skills that aren't great. The essay needs to be limited to 500-800 words only. I want specific advice on what to edit and cut out since I have one and half page long essay.
I really appreciate your help in this matter.