personal statement

[june_sp]

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Would someone in this forum feel generous enough to take a look at my personal statement to fix some of my awkward expressions and grammar errors?

It's actually not for dental school (no acceptances as of yet..poo) but for a masters program in biotech.

Please keep in mind English is my second language..

Anyone? 😍

 

[june_sp]

no one feels generous tonight 🙁

 

[nondescriptive]

I can do it. pm me

 

[doc toothache]

Total patience time 21 min.

 

[june_sp]

thanks!! I sent you a PM

 

[june_sp]

Total patience time 21 min.

oops, i hope i'm not too late. i sent you a PM, too.

 

[chill45]

oops, i hope i'm not too late. i sent you a PM, too.

He was talking about your patience.

 

[qnzbabi91]

He was talking about your patience.

I guess english really is her second language 😀

 

[june_sp]

I guess english really is her second language 😀

lol
hey, i wasn't lying!

 

[denticle]

i'll read it

 

[Sanedor]

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[UltimateHombre]

I know you have had some offers, but i am happy to take a look at it if you want, i have proofread quite a few over the past few years.

 

[glumaprimerbond]

If you want a professional editor to work it over for you, help you with ideas, identify the correct tone, etc. - go to Wordzilla.com! I used it, we'll worth it!

 

[glumaprimerbond]

If you want a professional editor to work it over for you, help you with ideas, identify the correct tone, etc. - go to Wordzilla.com! I used it, we'll worth it!

My bad...it's WordsZilla.com...plural words. Which makes more sense anyway.

 

[june_sp]

My bad...it's WordsZilla.com...plural words. Which makes more sense anyway.

good to know! thanks!