Pharmacy Personal Statement Proof Read Please

[asia20]

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Hi everyone!
Would someone please read my personal statement for pharmacy school? I would love it if someone ripped it to shreds if needed. I have both pharmacy and research experience, GPA is approximately 3.6. Please reply if you're interested!

 

[Jbrl]

Sure. Send me a pm.

 

[MyRealNameIs]

Send me a pm too. I will give you my thoughts.

 

[asia20]

I have no idea how to send personal messages, so do either of you have emails I can paste my statement?

 

[MyRealNameIs]

Haha I guess you figured it out
Sorry if I sounded harsh on the critique
You have a good story
Just too wordy and too much generalizations
Remember Pharmacists work closely with doctors and I would not characterize them so negatively despite your experience.
It makes you seem unwilling to work with doctors which is a necessity.