I would get all essays read before submitting. There was a place when I was in undergrad that help students read/proof their essays. You should check with your college, I am sure they have a place with people that help students with essays...my pre-health advisor also helped me with my essays as well and she didn't mind b/c it was part of her job...I would go to a professional for this. Unless someone in your family is an english professor or lawyer...😉
Which schools have supplemental essays? and which don't? I hate applying to schools with a million supplemental essays...🙄 I usually try to use the same essay for multiple schools too....