PS done, Need some review also....

[Hybridtavo]

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Hi there guys,
I got done w the PS and I got help from a couple of college and family friends. To me it sounds pretty good but Im at 4,631 characters (there we go) and dont know what to cut down (if Im not mistaken the limit is 4,500).
So if anyone is willing to check it out I'll greatly appreciate it.
This is the only thing Im missing in order to get things rolling.
Thank you ahead of time 👍

 

[funktion]

Its actually 4,500 characters, not words. You may have a lot more trimming to do.

 

[polarmolar]

Sure, I can read it over and try to find whats best to reduce, pm it.

 

[MissionDental]

Sure, PM it over if you'd like me to offer some suggestions.