PS help

[mizunorunner]

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Hi,
I was wondering if I could get someone to read over my PS. I'm having issues with making it flow well. I would greatly appreciate it! Also, I have to write a personal biography...any suggestions on how to go about that??? I feel like it is almost the same thing as writing a PS but you get to add in more experiences rather than just focusing on PT????

 

[jbizzle]

Hi,
I was wondering if I could get someone to read over my PS. I'm having issues with making it flow well. I would greatly appreciate it! Also, I have to write a personal biography...any suggestions on how to go about that??? I feel like it is almost the same thing as writing a PS but you get to add in more experiences rather than just focusing on PT????

PM it to me.

Well, my PS started with like an attention grabber (I know very cheezy)
And I just explained my volunteer experience and tied it in how I could relate to being a PT with the skills, traits, qualities I had. for example, I said something like, the first time I came in contact with PT, what I saw lured me in just a little bit. And the more and more I volunteered, the bigger my interest became.

I see PTs work with others well, and I explained how I work well in groups.

PT have good communication skills and how do I know that, because thats what I saw when I was volunteering and explained how I had good communication skills.

ANYWAY, I THINK YOU GET THE PICTURE LMFAO. I FELL SO VULNERABLE NOW. People are going to laugh at me lmfao.

You want me to PM you mine??? Remember, I applied to a total of 16 programs. So there is a possibility that you will apply to the same programs I did...keep that in mind 😉

 

[markelmarcel]

Well, my PS started with like an attention grabber (I know very cheezy)

Me too. 😉 I started mine off how I start my spinning classes. Haha. So, cheese is welcomed by me!