quickly grammar check this

[medstuddude]

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is it better to say:

volunteering at the internal medicine department at XYZ "reaffirmed my desire to become a physican"

or "reaffirmed my decision to become a physician"

thnaks

 

[SketchLazy]

it is better to say:

volunteering at the internal medicine department at XYZ "reaffirmed my desire to become a physican"

or "reaffirmed my decision to become a physician"

thnaks

I think 'desire' would be better because it sounds like you're more passionate about it.

 

[medstuddude]

hmm...thanks for ur input

I hate writing these essays

 

[Savannah]

it is better to say:

volunteering at the internal medicine department at XYZ "reaffirmed my desire to become a physican"

or "reaffirmed my decision to become a physician"

thnaks

"decision" makes it sound like you still weren't sure you wanted to be a physician. i would go with "desire".

 

[inaminute]

I'd change it to "confirmed"