Read over my activities? (not most meaningful)

[djsbaseball2014]

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Hey, I'm realizing there are not many resources when it comes to seeing how people write their descriptions for their activities. I was wondering if anybody would be willing to read my descriptions for some of my activities to just let me know if i am on the right track.

 

[deleted922750]

Hey, I'm realizing there are not many resources when it comes to seeing how people write their descriptions for their activities. I was wondering if anybody would be willing to read my descriptions for some of my activities to just let me know if i am on the right track.

Send it

 

[Rajaredhilu]

I would like to read them