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but my PS is based on this (not how magical an experience it was, but on introspection and what it taught me moving forward)
I know you've been overwhelmed with advice, but just wanted to quickly chime in here. I'm a current applicant (admitted) so take it for what it's worth.
Some of the best PS advice I got was to jettison ruminations on my international experience, other than just an incidental mention (something like "...my experiences with and passion for environmental health"). Your PS is a place for you to speak clearly and earnestly about your most formative experiences. Even for a gifted writer, one week spent doing something is just not convincing as a formative experience. It inevitably comes across as cliche, naive, blindly privileged, etc.
International volunteering isn't automatically deadly, but the circumstances have to be right and you have to be tactful in the way you explain it. For example, even though I got rid of it in my PS, I decided to keep it in my work/activities section (not MME though!) because:
-It wasn't clinical
-I received a scholarship for Pell Grant recipients to fully fund it
-It lasted a full summer
-I got academic credit for it
- It had relevance to one of my hobbies (SCUBA)
If there are special circumstances surrounding your international volunteering that you haven't fully explained (e.g. did you start a fundraiser to pay for it? Do you have ties to that particular country?), then consider keeping it. But leave it out of the PS.