Revised Personal Statement: Suggestions?

[BatGirl012]

I posted a couple days ago (maybe even a week ago) with Google Doc links to my three personal statements. (Link here: https://forums.studentdoctor.net/threads/personal-statement-help.1236825/#post-18489665 to read what people said before I edited them).

Anyway, I've revised them and would like some more input if you guys have any to give. I'm still having friends, family, professors, etc. read them but still want some "first-hand experience" advice if possible.

Thank you in advance.


https://docs.google.com/document/d/1V1MYlxfSA9kz-HPfLBkdrVXdyVE7wugx5dxJ6gYcTjA/edit?usp=sharing

https://docs.google.com/document/d/17XvZ_GdyALdSF4gADZ0hEwRH8Lo-Tv2sd5X0I1C1hrI/edit?usp=sharing

https://docs.google.com/document/d/10nZnK26__escrYPm9Ms_mGkIGoYFWR_5WkPzDropJPo/edit?usp=sharing

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