So I've been writing one of my essays and talking about how I've seen burnouts in healthcare from shadowing, volunteering, and working as an EMT. I propose how emotional care has worked beneficially for me in these circumstances, and talk about my research on trust in medicine. Would some adcoms find this pretentious.. as if someone who isn't a doctor yet is making judgments on something they don't understand? I tried acknowledging here or there that I'm only a pre-med but will this topic be a) a turnoff to physicians on the adcom, b) too cheesy?