the "Knocks your socks" off Personal Statement

[Taj]

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hey!
does any one have an example of an stellar personal statment....I am getting mine read by different people in the forum and while I htough mine was not too bad most of my readers said it was too bland...but totally appreciate their comments now i am gonna go spice it up..but i am having hard time figuring out what a really look a PS is suppose to look like...if any one has perviously gotten "acclaim" for theirs...would plz mind pm-ing it to me or posting it here...it will help me and maybe a lot of others out in writing our own!
thanks a bunch!
taj

 

[Taj]

looks like a lot of ppl are viewing but no one is replying 🙁

 

[deuist]

A knock your socks off personal statement is very subjective. I know that Essay Edge posts some samples. You can also try asking people to email their own statements to you.

 

[humuhumu]

You might get more responses in the pre-allo forum.

 

[aphasia]

You might get more responses in the pre-allo forum.

Idle curiosity. Why do you say that?

 

[deuist]

Idle curiosity. Why do you say that?

Because there are more posters on the pre-allo forum than on the re-applicant forum. Also, the very first post on the pre-allo board (also set as a sticky) is dedicated to personal statements.

 

[MoosePilot]

There are entire books on this topic, full of essays. I bought one at the local Barnes and Noble.

 

[CRY2STAL]

looks like a lot of ppl are viewing but no one is replying 🙁

Taj: I am looking for a copy of my PS now...I had similar comments when objective parties read by 2005 AMCAS essay. I then put it all on the line and got real honest. Send me your personal email address and when I find my disc I will send you a copy from my hotmail account. Good luck, and don't be afraid to "keep it real" in your PS...