thanks so much for your inputs!
i spent a lot of time on #2
Describe the path that brought you to your current interest in the health professions. Give a brief personal history, describing your previous career (or career goals), explaining why you have decided to pursue professional training in the healthcare field. This should include a description of previous experience in health care; please be specific about the amount of time spent (either paid or volunteer)
and it's soooo long- 2 pages.12 font.single spaced.
yea, i'm a bit confused about what #6 is asking.
Hi again brainimaging,
I think that you might be overthinking question #6 a bit. The majority of people (myself included) have led generally unexciting lives, and I'm sure the people reading your essay will understand that. They don't expect that all of their applicants will have some deep and profound moment to share (and to be honest, even if they did, that moment would probably have been mentioned in #2, #3 or #5!). So don't feel stressed out if you can't think of something new and dramatic to say for #6! Sometimes, even very little things can show significance.
To give you an example of this: when I applied back in early-March, I actually had not graduated yet from college. At that time, I was afraid that that might delay my application from being reviewed, so for #6 I briefly mentioned my situation and said that as soon as I graduate from college later in the month, a complete transcript will be sent to their office. This was important to my application and hadn't been mentioned anywhere else.
After that, I mentioned that I really had nothing else to add, because I believed that all the other questions had covered everything I wanted to share about myself. I finished #6 by letting them know that even though my decision to change careers was made fairly quickly, that I have nevertheless put a lot of serious thought into it and that I was willing to work hard in order to succeed. And then I thanked them for their time and that was it.
My response to #6 only took 105 words. It was short, simple and perhaps even a bit boring. If it's any help at all, try thinking of question #6 as being your 'closing argument' as to why you should be accepted into the program (and please, no "accept me because I'm smart!"
); after all, your response to question #6 is going to be the last thing that makes an impression on the reader.
Hopefully this helps take some of the confusion out of the question! Just remember that noone expects you to write about how you fight crime at night and cure cancer during your afternoons (though if you did, it certainly won't hurt to mention it
)! So don't stress out too much!
And also, another thing to think about is your response to question #2. While I am sure that there have been successful essays that are a few pages long, you need to be sure that everything you mention in the essay has significance. If your essay is long because it contains a lot of 'clutter,' my advice would be to delete the fluff--it will only take attention away from the things that really influenced your decision to pursue medicine (and that's something you definately don't want!). And even if everything in your essay is important, do try to shorten it a bit; if you yourself think that the essay is already too long, chances are, the reader will too! Just my thoughts and good luck again