Few days ago I completed my personal statement and I sent it to my advisor. Since I have worked in the field of optometry for more than 4 years, I thought I did a good job in writing my personal statement and provided enough evidence that illustrates my interest in the profession of optometry. But my adviser thinks I need a stronger reason. Here's what she said "To be honest, I actually think most of the content is very strong, and you don't have a lot of work to do. But the lack of concrete reasons for your interest in optometry is a serious shortcoming that you should reflect on carefully. Without these reasons, your essay won't convince the reader that you have a genuine passion for the field. " COULD YOU GUYS HELP ME OUT IN HERE, PLZ. Here's my e-mail address: [email protected] PLZ HELP ME OUT !!!!