Will someone look over my Experiences summaries please?

[mwsapphire]

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What it says on the tin. I had a lot of help with my PS, but would like somebody to please make sure my "experiences" section is good please.
Thanks,
mwsapphire

 

[Bad-Cop_No-Donut]

I can try

 

[mwsapphire]

I can try

Thank you! May I PM you?

 

[Bad-Cop_No-Donut]

Thank you! May I PM you?

yes of course 🙂