Biochemistry Major, Finance Minor, 3.95 cGPA/3.92 sGPA, 522 MCAT, is not 'cookie-cutter'.
Schools don't want you because of your stats and hours. They want you because of who you are, which isn't really shared in the original profile.
You should avoid the schools that only look at you as just your stats, hours, and a source of operational funds. Once you feel more comfortable sharing your experiences and personal insights that inform others why you would be a great physician, your writing will probably improve since you will be writing from your heart and your soul about how you connect with patients.