#personal statement

Hey! Is anyone out here willing to read my personal statement and offer guidance/critiques? THANK YOU

When I was 10 years old, I had a keloid, about the size of a fingertip, underneath my tongue, which was irrefutably uncomfortable and periodically painful. My parents told me that I needed surgery, during which surgeons would excise my keloid. I distinctly remember facing the fear that it would...

So I wrote about my experience working at a medical respite center for the homeless pretty extensively in my personal statement and how it made me want to study medicine. However, because I talk about it pretty in-depth in my PS, I think that the space in my most meaningful experience could be...

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